Customer Relationship Management System

Writing assignment please need help?

1.Rewrite the following sentences to remove the cliques and buzzwords. •Being a jack-of-all-trades, Dave worked well in his new general manager job. Revision: The Jack of all trades and Dave worked well at his new general manger job. •Moving Leslie into the accounting department, where she was literally a fish out of water was like putting a square peg in a round hole, if you get my drift. Revision: •My only take away from the offsite was that Laird threw his entire department under the bus for missing the deadline. Revision: •I'd love to help with that project, but I'm bandwidth-constrained. Revision: •The board green-lighted our initiative to repurpose our consumer products for the commercial space. Revision: 2.Rewrite each sentence so that it is active rather than passive. •The raw data are entered into the customer relationship management system by the sales representative each Friday. Revision: •High profits are publicized by management. Revision: •The policies announced in the directive were implemented by the staff. Revision: •Our computers are serviced by the Santee Company. Revision: •The employees were represented by Janet Hogan. Revision:

Public Comments

1. Dave was versatile and it served him well when he got his new job being general manager. Leslie getting a job in the accounting department was a bad idea, she doesn't have a clue what she's doing and will do miserably. That Laird blames his department for missing the deadline is the only thing I got from the meeting. Beyond that, sorry, but you're on your own - I don't immediately recognize how a lot of the buzzwords are functioning and I don't really want to dig them all up. This may help: http://socialmediasystems.com/rothmanguide/buzzwords-and-definitions/